Data Collection and Mental Health
Thesis: Data collection can be a beneficial way for researchers to understand today’s mental health crisis, as well as develop ways to overcome it. I plan on doing a 5 page essay for my project.
Revision Reflection #1
The global revision process was something that I had never done before this class, and I found it very useful. I found that it helped me to organize everything in my essay by dividing it into different sections: the introduction, the three different learning styles, and the conclusion. Next, I aimed for each section to include three things: a reference to Bain, a reference to Dweck, and a personal experience. Using this as a guideline was helpful in that I…
Reflection of Comparison Document
In my first draft, I was given two surface-level changes to make. However, I only followed one of them because I did not agree with the other one. The surface-level change I followed was to add a word to my sentence to better help the flow. I did not receive any global changes, however, I think there were some that could have been changed. I did not include a thesis statement, nor did I include the typical introduction, body paragraphs,…
