In my first draft, I was given two surface-level changes to make. However, I only followed one of them because I did not agree with the other one. The surface-level change I followed was to add a word to my sentence to better help the flow. I did not receive any global changes, however, I think there were some that could have been changed. I did not include a thesis statement, nor did I include the typical introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion format. The only global revision feedback that I received were some positive comments about the way my essay was put together. However, I feel like I could have improved my organization. The only issue was that I felt as if I would have to rewrite my entire essay to incorporate those organization ideas.